your poem reminds me of
the rose that I once was
who ever tried to prick me wrongly
I pushed ahead my thorn
whosoever loved me
I lay bare all with which I was born
my petals
no resistance
till another rose like me was born
The guys went forlorn
as many came over to my fertilizing lawn..
when many more colourful roses were born
morn after morn
sad so many continued to be torn
mans world they say
why were you a gal born?
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Poignant, Tender hearts are
Poignant, Tender hearts are vulnerable and are hurt easily because they give sincerely all of themselves. Well done.
joe
thank you so much Joe
for your appraisal
I agree with Joe. Regards,
I agree with Joe.
Regards,
so kind of you raj
to have come my way
and sprinkled water
so that many roses
live love and stay
Make it 3 in agreement
this one is a sincere piece. love the ending.
Alid
thanks
though ur comment is not clear
not clear?
which part?
make it 3 in agreement????
3 what??
loved
I'm just saying I agree with raj and geremia, that's all. There's 3 of us who agree with each other. 3 in agreement. get it?
Alid
glad thanks
alidz