The most delightful words
ever heard
ere take of
the wages start.
But this time there will be an exception,
a young King is being brought.
Tutankhamen
The Egyptian 18 year old King
laying in a solid golden coffin,
three thousand years since.
He is still embalmed!
They don’t want to his silent soul alarm
they will get him in
through the rear emergency door,
ere they finally fly off.
No one should know,
the King is sleeping still,
maybe they will extract a cell
yes they will
to resurrect the young kid,
who still sleeps since ages
behind closed jungle doors.
I found him there alone for sure
I won’t like to share the secret any more
lest his soul flies out
of the only unarmed door.
Glad all doors are sealed
and the pilot has
now towards the tarmac reeled.
All doors of earthly humans too sealed!
Now his DNA will to humans never be revealed...
Comments
a good entry loved
And you are getting good at recognising waffle it would seem, as I find none here.
one thing - You need to go to edit mode and click the button for the contest, so this goes onto the contest stream, or it may be missed
Good luck
Love judy
xxx
i tried but there is no such edit mode for this
will you have a relook also
I can't loved
Only you have control of your work
Go into edit, and at the bottom of the page just before you hit either preview or publish, there is a block that states contest. Click onto that...
xxx
yes that I have done but it mentioned new comers only never mind
i ain't in the running
never mind gnite ty Judy
you must've
done it and not known, as, as Rula says, it is now listed
and of course you are in the running !!!!
xxx
done it
Now I am sweating to the victory stand
hahahah aaaaa
thanks all
A different DNA from Loved
don't worry
Loved... It is listed among the other entries
Good luck in the contest.
Loved
This was a very good write and I enjoyed as Judy did the lack of extras in your write.
Keep writing like this Young Bard there is a light beckoning you out there some place.
Yours, Ian
sure twill be
bang dang
is this the kinda of slang
you wanna from me
shwall dee dee
Sure...
you have a shot! Not my cup of tea, but still, I recognize that it has merit, just for the subject and the treatment! Not sure why they won't allow DNA testing, but...~ Gee
geezer unlike you
I am a passerby
All these years have flown by
And what do you know
most have passed me by
hoping by now I must have passed by
intermingled in the starry sky
how can one now that distance fly?
to catch a simple passerby
time does also fly
so am I now here merged it twilight
the dawn breaks for folks like you
again
my form has lead me down
the stormy drain
lapsed in the folds of time
as time ultimately all does maim
and I can’t say a name
which hasn't passed
O you so noble....
Hi
The door to the past will always remain closed to all but our memories I suspect. Good direct flow from beginning to end. Thanks for entering......stan
your comment
kinda
made my heart throb stop
I wondered what u'd say
glad you spoke well
thanks Stan
I am now learning to scribble
where///ok how is Jess ?