I found my true love thru the darkness of my life her touch her kiss was the reason to for fill the love that was right
With opening of a single eye a walk to love a life to subscribe.
To lose her is beyond any fight because when she holds me she gives me the love that expands my life.
To lose him would be my question why when i love him till the day I die.
Jan 30, 2015
Press & Brenda
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I love this girl and she love me
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
I recorded it for you
https://soundcloud.com/user536630132/press-brenda-submitted-by
Honest and genuine, Press
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I really like this. My only suggestion is to break up the lines a little more, give it some good flow to match the super content. Straightforward, straight from the heart. Absolutely lovely.
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