Rula
Rula
Nov 26, 2014

A Thought

Judge not what thou hast oft in sight,
as deep must live the soul.
Thy naked eyen might tell thee lies,
whilst hearts shall tell it all.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Just experimenting a less modern language. Hope you don't mind it. :)

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

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R

raj

10 years 5 months ago

Very thoughtful poem about trusting the heart call.

Regards,

Rula

So kind of you to drop in with such a nice comment.
I always thought the English less modern language is really charming.

Rula

Rula

10 years 5 months ago

is the less modern word for "eyes" Loved.

Ian.T

Ian.T

10 years 5 months ago

Twix your God and the essence of all things, is a domain we shall call Heaven, because it is too beautiful for any other word.
That we shall dwell within this domain in perfection, is a task that we must try to achieve.
There shall be only a love of an energy that will eclipse all other things, there we shall be free of all man made stupidity,
Yours as always, Ian

Rula

totally agree. I like how you've said it all.

judyanne

but 'soul' and ''all'' is a weak rhyme (imo)
lol - it may be my aussie accent, but i think
''whilst hearts shall tell the whole.' might work better ???

this little beautie trips awesomely over the tongue when read aloud
love judy
xxx

B

I like how concisely you wrote this poem. A moral in verse--very lovely