I saw the telegraph, wow they got it all awry
poor Mackwill I ain’t sure did no wrong, should I feel sorry
there seems to be more of a conspiracy.
they have asked me to go into the darn Police
but they, big balls, haven't sent a comfy carriage for me
through my mist of wine I could have been a bit fuzzy
yes coach and horses, big guys numbered three, well maybe
yeah they threw a body out onto the bloody cobble
that night the mist never cleared, it may have had me wobble
Now in retrospect ma minds clear, there is no fog
you should blame a man possessed by Mog
I have often heard about of this skulking filth
damn that Ripper and others just held their sway.
dispatching all of a sudden that came their way
In the eerie places of old London streets, in town
all left before the darkness came down
may be tis all, I still think, a myth to scare you all
Comments
loved
You need to enlist this under the "Study in Pink WS"
Thank you.
The PINK
Not DRAMATIC
Thank you
Rula
Did you realise this is the first time that Loved has taken part in any joint efforts let alone a complex WS.
Loved never likes long pieces yet has taken the time out to join this one.
I think we should commend the effort, and help the write,
Yours as always, Ian
but
It isn't the first time loved is submitting for the same workshop. Still Loved needs to enlist it under the right work shop. "A Study in Pink."
Loved
Well for your first time at complex WS you have exceeded.
Well done young Bard just wanting to see what Jess has to say.
Take care great write, yours, Ian.T
Loved
You have done a very good job in this, so now we have a witness who isn't really sure of what they saw because he may have been a little drunk at the time. Waiting patiently for my turn at this....
thank you so much
the credit goes to you for all your encouragement Ian
the bard
already posted why is WS not seeing it??"Story Telling in Verse
"Story Telling in Verse: A Study in Pink" section 18
and in stream
I am pleased as punch
that you are participating in workshops. This is two in a row. I can't wait for the limerick workshop... yours will be a kicker.
You did not put this in the workshop submissions list because you didn't click the little round button that gives you a drop down menu in which you may choose this workshop.
But I can copy you from The Stream. What I worry about is that not everyone will be able to comment on your addition if it is lost in The Stream and not in the Workshop proper.
I will say though, your submission is classic Loved.
If Jess is reading this (and he may not be because he doesn't know where to look): You're up old man.
thanks again the stream says wait 10hours you can't i can let j*
Story Telling in Verse: A Study in Pink" section 18
I saw the telegraph, wow they got it all awry
poor Mackwill I ain’t sure did no wrong, should I feel sorry
there seems to be more of a conspiracy.
they have asked me to go into the darn Police
but they, big balls, haven't sent a comfy carriage for me
through my mist of wine I could have been a bit fuzzy
yes coach and horses, big guys numbered three, well maybe
yeah they threw a body out onto the bloody cobble
that night the mist never cleared, it may have had me wobble
Now in retrospect ma minds clear, there is no fog
you should blame a man possessed by Mog
I have often heard about of this skulking filth
damn that Ripper and others just held their sway.
dispatching all of a sudden that came their way
In the eerie places of old London streets, in town
all left before the darkness came down
may be tis all, I still think, a myth to scare you all
*let jess curse me less
send it to him he will then say
yes....
he only taught me how to progress
Remind me again
what is the name of your character..
Alid