When you speak of love
as truth
in your blooming rosy youth
tis no sin
we all in love so begin
and
as you take shelter behind the moon
love will be born
beyond the clouds soon
till then you have not sinned
I stand guarantee for you
till you share her with your
kith and kin
then alone twill become
incestual sin
and
you shall never win
this alone attributes as sin
what ever you call sin
as sin
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Loved
This write though very good, there was a bit missing to me as I read, it left me hanging there waiting for the rest.
Just a few more lines to link the thought with a reality of things, then excellence will to you wing.
Yours as always Ian.T
where r u hanging
friend Ian please do specify
I shall send a ladder
hahahaha