I beg to disagree
Life, single and lonely
is like a palm tree
high above the beach
in the sky
neither bears fruit,
nor shares shade
ere in the tsunami of life
it finally fades
life is like wise
Feel for yourself
as a butterfly
in a flame
it also to find love tries
but it dies
so we must also give
our love a chance
where in we cherish
life's romance
a single bird
can be lonely
never a summer
it can ever
bring for thee
will your isolatary vision
change ye!
Comments
Though I believe
That we need sometime off of everything mundane, but not a too long one.
I loved the examples that you've used. Especially the first. I thought it supurb.
Life, single and lonely
is like a palm tree
high above the beach
in the sky
neither bears fruit nor shares shade
ere in the tsunami of life it finally dies
isolatary [isolation?]
thanks -------------------the errors
creation
as I use newer words
not included in dictionary
and YES....
Life, single and lonely
is like a palm tree
high above the beach
in the sky
neither bears fruit
nor shares shade
JUST STANDS BY
ere in the tsunami of life it finally dies
lovely
Oh the lovely poem,
sparkled like a gem.
Words of wisdom
along with the rhythm
When it is lovely ,
its as lovely as it gets
but when words are too many (in each lines, that is)
it makes me mad.
Alid
have an
antidote
lines we all quote