The Wedding Poem

Just to be happy is all you need
not dreams of ambition or desire to succeed.

Just to be happy always caring and kind
with love in your heart and peace in your mind.

Just to be happy in a warm embrace
no need to be cool or win any race.

Just to be happy no grey skies above
the sun always shining down on your love.

Just to be happy your whole life through
Sharing true love, the way that you do.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A rewrite of my poem 'Just To Be Happy' , to make it suitable for my daughter's wedding

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

About the Author

Country/Region: GBR

Favorite Poets: Rather than poets I tend to be influenced by songwriters and have a love of lyrics.

Comments

Hi there

Thought I'd pop in and say how much I like the sentiments and flow of this delightful poem! It's soo full of positivity and sunshine! I hope your daughter has a great wedding! ( you have given her some wise and caring advice )!

Loved it!

Mand xxxxxx

thank you

Thank you Mand,
Nice to hear from you again,
best wishes, Tim

MAND and TIMBO

My goodness what a lovely day to find two of our poets returning after an absence.
Welcome back both of you.!
A lovely piece for your daughter to have, Good to read your words again will look forward to more from you, Oh! and our Mand what a lovely place to find you.
More poems please, Yours Ian.T

The Wedding Poem

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Hi there

thank you

MAND and TIMBO

Thanks

Thanks Ian

thank you