Russian separatists
Bombs bursting in Ukraine
Plane shot down from the skies
Ukrainians shudder, brace up for war.
Convoy of humanitarian aid
Ukrainians dismayed, draw suspicions
Since when, do enemies offer aid to their victims.
Aug 17, 2014
Russia and Ukraine
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Barbara
"Since when enemies offer aid to their victims"
This is how it goes these days, ha?
We have an Arabic proverb, but I don't know if it has any equivelant. It says "kill him they walk in his funeral". Very weird world, isn't it?
I thought this one can make use of morphing for a more effective impact on the reader, but don't ask me how :)
Thanks for sharing dear.
Rula
Yes it certainly is . Weird. I live if somebody tell me how to mask it morph lol
Barbara
perhaps if you added something like
since when "do" etc
it would complete the sentence
Chrys
Thanks I'll do that.
Hi is this
I made to changes. Do it morph or work better.
Yes
That feels better (at least tto me) lol
thanks for listening