Geremia
Geremia
Aug 10, 2014

GRATITUIDE

GRATITUDE -update

Thank you for caring for me
with deep love and affection.
Thank you for all the ways
you soothed my days,
Thank you for being my eyes,
my legs ,my hands,
Thank you for understanding
when I cried.
Thank you for crying with me,
And if there is a world beyond
look for me when you too are gone.
I will be waiting...

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Rula

Rula

10 years 8 months ago

piece of gratitude.
Thank you for sharing those noble feelings Joe.

Ian.T

Ian.T

10 years 8 months ago

Call our names and we will be there, as there is no time in that beaut place all time is now.
I shall not race you on this one, lol
Yours Ian.T

lovedly

perhaps as it seems

we shall have to go ahead of thee
to welcome yee into the folds of eternity
where you will not be found wanting

the universe has a larger purse
that the earth can boast of
and Geremia I have been watching sincerely
that your days on mommy Earth are more heavenly

you may not be as happy
when in the arms of times unknown wild wilderness
hope you do know it

so stay as long as you can recognise me
a long way we all have yet to see
so be not at sea!