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Jun 08, 2014

Alien’s humans

Alien’s humans
But we are not yet established as aliens
once we are able to make a city
on Moon and Mars
also get used to the atmosphere there
after many, many die in thin air
then when we establish
that we can establish,

a very bright lad like someone
okay like me, will say
see I told you we all are aliens by the way
so till then do stay
yes accept we may have been
once upon a times aliens

loitering just by the universes side way
within a dark tunnel in time
they call a holocaust ….
maybe we all were truly then cast!

if I compose any more than this
you will call me an epicurial
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About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

10 years 10 months ago

Hurry up and pick a side,
as we are running out of patience with you humons.
You have desecrated a beautiful world with your greed.
Time to choose sides, love you all, your favourite alien.
A D Juster, Second star on the right and on till dawn..
Not one of my favourite writes..

loved

sad you did not like it
now u have set a trend of dislikes
no one else will read this

so I have to act as an alien
and delete it

Wait some other alien is knocking
shall go and meet
till then enjoy my other sweet

loved

what a relief
AH!
HAHAHahahhaaa
I wasn't going to anyway

Thanks for the dare
you make me fight bare
and of course fair!

Ian.T

Senryu for you:-
.
Loved you are so bad.
But a good poet all the same
Some do know your name..
.
Just have a great day and a great sense of humour.
Yours Ian.T

loved

Ian you are so good
everyone would wish you
so does this bard loved

is it okay sir!

7 5 7

alidzain

but I won't say this is a bad poem. Its quite unique in its own way.

Alid