the soul wakes........... forced devalue
festival minds preventing them derivation
this was some inundate carnage
squeal and sobriety pertinent
immobilized foraging of those partook
surrender into invisibility
for on earth if recall be
after the penance of fate adjourn them
from much needed time to grow old
deficit kids- were exclusive saints
for this cause. About faith,
what is this whiplash whirlpool
dragging much more participants than enrolled
discipleship of fireball, inhuman inferno
they become the divine accomplice
in pieces nether, a rake to gather
much more fragments, lying in state exhortation
for terrorism, macabre immutable
should they seek the purpose of lower breeds
like worms who have no scientific guru
of human to human predators
Comments
emeka
The internal logic is consistent. The title is all the more powerful after having read the poem. There is much to think about after reading it.
Once again, thank you for the write.
True what blole said.
Belief in God causes the most inhumanity.
The poem lacks poetic quality. Is a rant. Use your words carefully to create a sound, a voice. It will be far more effective.
See he means well
say hark and listen
you may gloss over if you feel
read and comment on others
then see how many support thee
I will always
alongside be
sublime from a seamstress of
sublime from a seamstress of poesy
My film production company
is called "Sublime and Ridiculous Productions". Does that enlighten?
only proactive deluge i guess
only proactive deluge i guess