A mirror simply reflects ...
the surface
depth is measured by ones eye
don't feel shy
we all are worthy creatures of nature ...
and...
we only mirror
what!
ourselves......
feel the essence of the individual,
mirrors
are only silent observers,
this is what anyone can tell
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Hi loved
Perhaps one day they'll figure out how to make a mirror that reveals what's inside. I think you might want to work on your last line a bit more...seems disconnected to me...........stan
very well mirrored
Stan ...
thanks for your kindness
and I have reviewed
Loved
If only we could find the perfect Mirror.
Then there would be no more problems, if all could see the real self.
A good write young Bard, Take care,
Yours Ian.T
u r my duplicate poet
And my mirror too
when you traverse my page
I walk besides u....
Hi Loved
For some reasons, this piece reminds me of a Malay saying which, if translated in English ,will be "look at yourself in the mirror before you condemn other's shortcomings". Anyway, its a lovely piece .Good job. ;D
Alid
looking...
i dont know....what it is....
the look important
vanity
ego
within i know little of
and of warmth i give
little
the rare moments
shinning
this gives me hope
thank you
Esker your reading me
gives me more hope to compose
as you then share your warmth
with a simplistic poet like me
Aye, the eye perceives more
Aye, the eye perceives more than a mirror can candidly render, such that others might see in us an esoterically deeper being than what we might observe in ourselves.
Lovely,
logic
BELATED maybe
but thanks for saying tis lovely
like the flicker of a candle in miles...our eyes percieve
we can see the flicker within
if we are using sight as a guide
our voices recorded hear let us
speak....our words
let us feel...