grime of the hexed hysteria

About This Poem

Last Few Words: this poem is biblical talking about the encounter on Jacobs ladder where he saw angels, many words need personal collocation to understand their semantics to the verse, e.g scule annd strel , mean miniscule and minstrel but their lexical insertion are prolonged so it gives it a double bind also diadem , and the demon eyes actually refer to the angels Jacob saw but using demon was because he saw this in a dream , and the rich marina are their beautiful streaming state which i earlier compared to as shoal

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