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Mar 07, 2014

In God’s company!

I'll carry on till i can …..or till they carry me away …..
Time and tide wait
for no man
ME or not ...for who else it can

we are sitting in an open van
come along says God... if you can
O I am also lonely like you...
come soon says God will you...
I need company too...
So sends roses for you love the world if you wish too so long I’d stayed away
No tears fell my way...so God be the leading light …
Leave everything in the doldrums of time …and take the night flight …
May God for ever be with you
as time flies
we all know and knew…

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 1 month ago

If I say I like this I will tell lies,
but if I say it is not good will that God smite me.
Look forward to your next piece young Bard,
Yours Ian.T

Ian.T

I have been away helping my Son sort out his business, he was taking on too much and needed some form of organisation.
I am back now so I expect you to be writing some grand things for my comment quill, Take care Yours Ian.T

Seren

Seren

11 years 1 month ago

I have to say I didn't enjoy it much either,(waits for the lightning strike), I will keep my eye open for your next :)

love Jayne x