At last a subject to get my teeth into
With that underlying current of pulsating red gold
Yum Bloody Yum
Soft flesh the kiss of death
Or if you like everlasting flight
I is the creature of the night
Yesterday I wore shades but to no avail
The mere thought of day made me feel queer
Bring on the shadows
The night I first had a fright
I had seen all the vampire films there were
Gorgeous woman and lots of blood everywhere
Then reality sank in
Flying around at night the Earth I skimmed
All I could find on those trips of mine
Well here’s the truth if you should wish to wander as I do
Most of my women would make a tough stew
I don’t recommend this eternal curse to you
My first hit was a woman of ninety two
Good day to you I shall sleep on through
Then wander again in a new vein
Comments
Hi Ian
Could have been worse. Could have been a 93 year old Man lol...................stan
Stan
Now I am not sure, it had boobs of a sort,
but I didn't look further than the neck I promise LOL.
Take care out there,
Yours Ian.T
They're going to come for you soon.
Don't let them use the white coat. It's not a tux no matter what they say.
Wesley
It''s far too late they said they were from Scarface, as I remembered he wore a white suit, so I was caught unawares.
Wondered why they wore Nike gym shoes,
But it was the van that gave them away it was a lovely padded thing with big ornate locks,
Please come and tell them I is not mad..
Yours Ian.T He He
But Ian...
... you are mad.
Wesley
Please don't come over to bail me out I have some people on my side and once they are let out they will petition for my release He He.
I know my friends there are four but total many so thanks for your usual support, Yours Ian.T
Boiling
Boiling toughened meat will always break it down...
My blood boils often...does that make me tender-hearted in any way?
Jog-on!
Ells xx
Ells
This was just a write for Stan as he asked for us all to write a vampire piece to see how we all were different, but it is hard just being able to come out at night, and writing in the dark, the red ink doesn't show up very well on Humon velum.
Thanks for your visit, have to fly the sun is coming up,
Yours Ian.T
Good Heavens
Ian, you are crossing over to my side....welcome! I abandoned vampires after my stint on the original Neo as Hardcorechick28. Intriguing write, nice to see the darker side coming out. :):)
Carrie
I ain't crossing over as the flood water is too deep,
and I can't swim very well.
This one is for Stan as he was asking for us all to write a Vampire piece to just see the differing ways we write.
Hope you all are well I am off to my Son's for a couple of weeks on Wednesday, I shall try and keep in touch with you all lol.
Look forward to your Vampire write????
Yours Ian.T
I missed
That request but I am sure the raven can drum up a good vampire write for you...until then...
Hi, everyone
LOL. Love the poem and the comments.I've written one on zombie. Call it "The Frustrated Zombie".Check it out. Going to write one on vampire soon.
Alid
Ian
I had to laugh at Wesley's comment I am wondering why he hasn't said it to me yet, I have the papers to prove my madness... giggle :)
wonderful poem I loved it totally didn't know what to expect, I pleasantly enjoyed this one
much love always JC xxx
Have all of you
met me? If anyone has a one way ticket on the crazy train, it's me! LOL! My world is full of vampires, serial killers and other things that make you scream in the night! Working on my vampire poem...we shall see how it turns out...
Carrie
Just taking bookings for my Coven I know that's for witches but I can be bitchy sometimes lol, Take care,
Wesley I am worried about him????
Yours Spuggy
Ian
Vampire poem posted...feel free to ride by and read
Jayne
Am off to my Sons in the morning so still need to pack my things lol
Take care am taking the laptop with so may write some poetry if I remember how,
Yours Ian.T
Jayne
Wesley is only jealous that I have lovely padded wagons to drive me around, and a beautiful room where I can run at the walls without hurting myself. LOL
Sorry I missed replying to this one, I am in Cornwall and my backup files are not here. You take care and make sure you rest, especially those thoughts of yours, you are good and a lovely person so never doubt that,
Yours as always Ian.T
my vampire poem is done
its entitled "Vampies' Night." Check it out.
ALID
solitude
your poem carries no remorse, this is only achieved artistically, which you do so well
Emeka
should I have remorse for being able to fly around at night
and to live for eternity, come on people would give their eye teeth for that I just sink mine into the odd vein lol,
Thanks for dropping in just make yourself at home the sun has just set...
He He
Ian
You're becoming dangerous of late.
Never play with vampires.
I can't even imagine I write half of this. Well done!
Rula
I am so sorry I missed your comment on this one I was away from home for a while, thanks a lot for your visit.
Me dangerous Ha Ha
Only if you leave your window open at night
But to fly in your region would take too much planning and you have to trust so many day people with transporting your box.
(Ref Dracula)
This was just a fun piece I haven't been out after dark for a long time, the stories of what happens frighten me He He.
Take care sweet lady I may recover ???
Yours as always Ian.T