lovedly
lovedly
May 12, 2015

your May day ..we come to play

Life is all love and play
then go away..
any day
sad u r folks chose
MAY DAY
Hope they enjoyed their earthly stay

Mine had a wider choice
first in Jan
next in July
followed by 5th May..

next in Dec
and
yet another in October
others in July... October
just one in August
yet one sadly true
early in September too

when will I go wish I,
not heavens knew
do any one of you?

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Sparrow

This cannot be a poem as it is a replicant of a comment there must be a separation of words in that use the comment to write a piece or visa versa.
You have a bad habit of cutting and pasting a comment you have made and hoping it is a poem, not so my friend come on I know you have much to say,
Yours Ian

Sparrow

Behave yourself, you know that your input to Neopoet is read and listened to.
If you go anywhere I shall send the Children after you to play, they love playing games lol..
Take care Young Bard, Yours as always Ian