loved
loved
May 19, 2012

You Said It

You credit me more than most over here
I was abused ... thrown to the sharks ...for consumation... if not consumption of
opposing poetic parlance....

distraught minds tried their utmost to banish me ...
but Loved withstood those trying times
and never gave in..... for only a single policy ,
we ought to imbibe
just remember friend this ..

''when one is wrong ...admit it instantly ...
let the punishment for the crime be death ...
but when one is right
fight
till the end
ere it results in the finality of fatality '''

we all deserve and none is obscured
for an indefinite period of time
sooner than later ....we all shall pass by
and though we all know....
still we lend a deaf ear ....to the inevitable
its no sin
but a realization of a destiny
one has to singularly live.

2.
Great information which you give ..
about two sons

You will be amazed
when I say how it fits
into my study of the
Human Mind...
Based on
Environment...
Circumstance
and
Heredity import..

3.
Common in the sense mostly on board

not as simple ones
but noteworthy
of poetic assurance ,
for others to mutually
ascribe and subscribe views ....with inordinate passion ...
as we comment unbiased ,
with freedom to assure the readers
that they are worthy of the salt
they sprinkle in the memorable wordiness of poetry
we may call verse,
if not what i said ....worse.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

temidayo

I don't really.get the general idea of this piece but I maybe biased.I do think it's a good piece by a great poet or a great poem by a good poet.maybe I attempt at flattery. Save me provide the tutelage that I too may reread connect dots, and see where you shot the i's and crossed t's.

loved

It seems you are the only one
who hasn't read any poetry of mine .
Perhaps once you do ...
you may react
in a different way .

Thanks for your maiden visit by the way
Do read some of mine, anyway..

temidayo

I don't really.get the general idea of this piece but I maybe biased.I do think it's a good piece by a great poet or a great poem by a good poet.maybe I attempt at flattery. Save me provide the tutelage that I too may reread connect dots, and see where you shot the i's and crossed t's.

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 11 months ago

A poetic summary of past times and hopes to come, well written but in its complexity will lose a few readers in there some place, I guess you will have to dig them out lol,
Take care young Bard, much life to really live yet, Yours Ian.T