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Oct 02, 2012

you are so intimate

that's what I thought
as I stepped forward
my chest seemed to be caught
in the lengthy nails
I imagined to be, too true
yes that was you,....

then a side twist of my body
upon yours curvaceous
jerked me off
as you tried to too,

but sudden transformation of a reality,
to a dream that now say you,
made me go down the corridors
naked to scream
foul play upon my nerves
I did display,
how could you place
my thoughts in disarray?
to calm me down to look like a fool
Imagining in my dreams
Sweety twas really you

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

Nilmini

How glad I am to know that I've got the power to disarray your thoughts!

This is one of my favourites.
I like the word use and you had me checking the dictionary at times.

Candlewitch

I too, liked this poem very much, because of its layers of depth. You get better and better with each new write!

always, Cat (& eddy)