you are but just one
amongst millions
who have their lives run
but you are one in a million
who has life's race
so meritoriously won
to cherish you now
mankind has its voyage begun
Dec 26, 2014
you are but just one ALIVING TRIBUTE TO JOE GEREMIA more may add on please
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Style/Type: Free verse
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and in waiting!
if only there were more folks in this world like you
guys like me would have a long swim
in the arms of truthful universe
where every step one does traverse
is a bounden curse
you enliven the dying soul
as you not alone
but also help others reach ones goal
in your humility lies peace
and it provides succour as a piece
for kinds like me
who have yet to field
a poetic yield
times not far when your dreams may come true
and
if I have swum across so far
tis cause of folks
Jess, Ian, Esker, Stan, Snowman and Judy
Mostly because of Joe, Geremia you
as you have nursed
this infant from poetic soil
This is so beautifully said,
This is so beautifully said, Just what I needed to live my soul this lonely New Year's day. I wish for you all the wonderful things life has to offer,
Thank you to a dear and loyal friend,
joe
Joe
You are never alone, you are but a thought away from all those that love you and know you.
We are here on a different level but still hold you in the highest esteem.
Have a quiet thoughtful time ad know it stretches out to infinity, yet is closed in the now only by our inability to travel there.
Go well young Joe and know we walk with you always, Yours Ian
if u do recall
I had promised you
you will get across Xmas and new year too
my prediction has come true
through new year2015
poems many more you will compose
and in you all neopoet does confidence impose
as per some repose
happy be the light
the tomorrow
as and when it comes
no one knows when
not for one....
Give this site the fillip needed now
your poetry is read by all and how
cause you are
the ALIVEST POET now!
for joe
lovedly
Thu, 2015-01-01 21:22
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if u do recall
I had promised you
you will get across Xmas and new year too
my prediction has come true
through new year2015
poems many more you will compose
and in you all neopoet does confidence impose
as per some repose
happy be the light
the tomorrow
as and when it comes
no one knows when
not for one....
Give this site the fillip needed now
your poetry is read by all and how
cause you are
the ALIVEST POET now!
Loved
A great tribute to our Joe, he is and will be with us always,
When he journeys on where there is no time, then he will wait and smile as we to must journey there also and it will be as if we have never left,
Yours Ian
but for you
no one else reads
so i now post not
but wish u a happy new year too
a days old chick ....2015
Loved
I think you are right in that people don't read or they are to damn lazy to comment.
I spend a lot of time here on Neo and am becoming fed up with the lack of comments on works.
Jess even had a dig the other day about not paying for premium membership and I just gave up.
I send money to Neopoet when I feel to, it is bad enough being a member as it is.
I would gain nothing from sending money and don't really want to become a member of that premium order.
My knowledge of poetry has improved from my research and from some of the comments I have received, but am losing faith with a lot of things here.
I shall keep a low profile for a while and not spend as much time here, take care young Bard,
Yours Ian
PS:- where do you post now ????
Iab, thank you for being my
Iab, thank you for being my friend. I don't know what will happen or precisely when, but we all must come to am end, ready or not.
joe
Joe
did you ever listen to the tape I sent, it is not a conversion thing, it is only a tape of me talking to some of the Children out there some place, it will not in anyway try to change you it is more of a comfort tape.
Well it has been such a long time since I sent it to you, the children have been there with you many times, they can only hold a thought not a physical being.
Go well young Joe and know we are here with you always, Yours, Ian
Ian, I think I emailed you on
Ian, I think I emailed you on this, My religion forbids any "contact"" with those that have passed. I did ask my priest why and he gave me a reason I cannot share
love to my friend, Ian
Joe
Thank you for your reply to my question, and that the priest had told you that to communicate with the other side is forbidden what ever the reason so it matters not.
All will be clear to you as you journey on, I will call you where ever you are and you can still come and have a cup of tea with me.
Love you Joe and many thanks for being here.
Yours Ian and the Children
Log on issues...
computer issues...technology issues.....just a minor glitch..
went around it....got another patch cord working....
We strive forward...penniless or rich....the journey
iceberg a plenty
I find your keen mind and memory detail incredible my
friend...Your poetry hitting nails on the head
an observations witty
A Merry New Years and forthcoming days!!
Thank You Mr Geremia
My Dear Esker
this message is for Gerema
the poetry above is mine
he may not reach ur message
suggest to send him as PM
Your poetry to this poet is apt and kind Loved!
I shall send him a PM..
Thank You!
thank u so much
regards esker happy new year