Victorclaude
Victorclaude
Nov 08, 2010

you’re driving me crazy

whilst walking down some
street one day

a fellow came up to me -- began
a conversation

of many things we spoke
of life in general --
and life in specific --
he looked at me after a time
with
an odd view askance

I was crazy -- he told me
I was driving him crazy -- he said

I winked one wink
and rejoined, "I needn't drive you
crazy, my good sir, you're
within walking distance
of that particular destination."

I walked on down the road.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

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Country/Region: USA

Favorite Poets: Wallace Stevens

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

10 years 4 months ago

This needs a good edit to bring it to others liking.
The piece seems to be disjointed and jumpy just needs an edit to iron out the lumps,
Yours Ian.T