the worlds a fast moving away
towards eternity ….
moms and pops
play hide and seek equally
in the far folds of the universe
one has yet to traverse
an outstanding poet like you
as I stand out too
but you are exquisite
what am I
you alone can say
a legend will I become like you one day,
someday
only heavens can portray
let me not my wisdom betray
as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone
man…
a ticket to space for me
Comments
one ticket to ride
You and Joe making poems out of poems sigh I think its wonderful to be inspired by other writers
I have been on many occasions
Love Jc xxx
you are e welcome to join
as a ticket less traveler hahahaa
as I stand out in the garden
as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone
OUTSTANDING !
thank you Sir ..you inspire me beyond the beyond
...''''as I stand out in the garden
as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone
OUTSTANDING !
JOE GEREMIA
You took the words from my
You took the words from my mouth,
as I rolled down this page thinking I would remark
on exactly the same portion of this poem:
"as I stand out in the garden all alone
Seeing the clouds go bye
in search of the ones since gone"
Exactly, Joe and Jayne, wonderful.
Ann.
thank you ma'am
for your lovely comment