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Dec 04, 2010

Yes ,Summary Disposal

Yes,Summary Disposal

You are now falling out
In the wilderness
I hope some one shall come
To hold your hand

I am a positive person,
I only inject a positive injection
In the minds of those ailing
Or in life they’re trailing

Upon your soul,
Treat me as a total stranger,
God sent to bring you out
From a reverie,
That I see.

As science advances
In your time
Your minds eye
Will be instantly tapped
By microchips implanted
In the near future

Hopefully a new voice
You shall nurture.

The Alps or Thames
Are just the same destinations
But never in your confined cabin
Ever remain this is my reservation

Go explore the world,
Help yourself more,
You have to be thy self
Your own master for sure

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

C

An astute reminder that we are the masters of our fate. Thank you for sharing.

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14 years 4 months ago

thank u ur kind to respond

‘Obama bowed
Also the crowd clapped
Then he vowed’

howz this haiku too