Beauty of a poem lies
not when its posted
but painted
in the minds of many
who devote time and imagery
trying to trace the poet's mind
else the poem needs
a fresher brush stroke
to others passion evoke
that's my take
of this lovely poems
more shall assemble
hopefully to read em
Comments
dear lovedly,
many poet's poems don't get read because many of those poets don't read and comment/critique on other poets work. you get what you give...think on that.
favorite lines:
else the poem needs
a fresher brush stroke
to others passion evoke
that's my take
of this lovely poems
*love, Cat
Thank you
I learnt it long ago when a poetess like you
advised me so
now years ago
Thanks Cats