lovedly
lovedly
Jan 07, 2015

the world beckons who first ,

the world beckons who first ,
none know

who will have the first cup
you, i or Joe
tis all unknown

but the fact that i have an eagles eye
and a monsters fastidious brain
can't be just let go down any drain
in stream all my works shall remain

let our grandchildren read the same
and like Jess ,
hopefully they will not call us insane
as jokers amongst poets
we leave by the bye lane
let us as Neopoets
till then remain

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

10 years 3 months ago

A thought is eternal a write has to have a thought so just work it out, your words will be for ever,
Yours Ian.T

judyanne

You haven't waffled, it is concise and to the point, and it works well

Love judy
xxx

mand

mand

10 years 3 months ago

Your poems will always remain,
they wont go down the drain!
because they are so clever
they'll be here forever!

Nice poem Loved

Love Mand xxxx