the world beckons who first ,
none know
who will have the first cup
you, i or Joe
tis all unknown
but the fact that i have an eagles eye
and a monsters fastidious brain
can't be just let go down any drain
in stream all my works shall remain
let our grandchildren read the same
and like Jess ,
hopefully they will not call us insane
as jokers amongst poets
we leave by the bye lane
let us as Neopoets
till then remain
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Loved
A thought is eternal a write has to have a thought so just work it out, your words will be for ever,
Yours Ian.T
Thank you so much
that is my endeavour
Ian my friend here
there are many more also dear
i like this loved
You haven't waffled, it is concise and to the point, and it works well
Love judy
xxx
I like your frankness ..judy
Yeah...
I haven't waffled here at all
as I do ere summer
as ere fall
I am loved after all
Your poems will always remain
Your poems will always remain,
they wont go down the drain!
because they are so clever
they'll be here forever!
Nice poem Loved
Love Mand xxxx
thanks mand
u r so kind
when I am being read
yet not dead
do say who is reading
please I'd love to hear voices
even when I'm deaffy