<p>IN MY CHILDHOOD THERE WAS ALOT OF WONDER AND ADVENTURE WONDER LIKE TORRENTIAL STREAMS OF WATER FROM SWAMPS STREAMS PONDS BY MYSELF IN THE SPRING ALLTHOUGH I HAD MY BOROTHER AND OUR GOOD FRIENDS ADVENTURE EXPLORING WOODS AND FIELDS ONE TIME IN THE CITY I WAS WITH MY MOTHER IN A DEPARTMENT STORE CONFUSING MANIKENS FOR PEOPLE PEOPLE FOR MANIKENS OUT SIDE THE GRADE SCHOOL ONE LATE SPRING DAY A FRIEND CAUGHT A BEE IN HIS HANDS WITHOUT STINGNG THEN LET IT GO</p>
Oct 01, 2022
WONDERS
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I HOPE THIS ADDS MAGIC TO YOUR LIVES
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
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write in all caps! It feels like you are shouting! ~ Geezer.
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