how clearly I saw myself
when you brushed a rebellion of hair
to the ranks of God
quaking the mountain on which my
heart lay
in that stranger cold
without you
Nov 05, 2011
without you (poem by Barry)
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Dear Anna
thanks for sharing this write of Barry...it is very effective in terms of expressing the void and the craving
Dear Anna,
I agree with raj. Barry is as eloquent as ever.
always, Cat
eloquence and silence
are the two requisites
of a great poet
who has one for ever guessing ...
what did the poet say ,
rather mean,
and
you so excel
even when you so comment ...
just great so nice to see you
off and on kailash