Trail
Trail
May 17, 2023
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Neopoem Of The Week May 14th To May 21st 2023

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WINTER NIGHTS

I sing for these cold winter nights
When the entire world seems to be asleep.
For the broken hearted who are still up
The lonely and the forgotten

I used to think life rejected me
That it would continue to beat me down
Every time I tried to rise
There are times I almost gave up
But somehow I held on

Now then a winter night comes along
I cannot sleep so I go outside
To look at the stars and dream
I only have my shirt on so I'm cold
But the night sky is just so beautiful
So quiet and peaceful

I sing for these winter nights
When my heartbeat matches that of the universe
When for just a moment
I am neither lonely nor broken
Dear God, how beautiful it is
To simply be
A. SWANTALALA

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Winter has come to the southern hemisphere. It's only natural it appears in my poetry.

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Botswana

Favorite Poets: Charles Bukowski

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