The Wind of Change... Unofficial entry Serious Limerick workshop

Politics is a religion
Unless you play, stop your bitchin'

There's not one who cares if you don't
So it matters not if you won't

But there's nothing that we'd rather see
Than someone windward taking a pee

Last Few Words: I know that I am not officially a part of this workshop, but I couldn't resist!

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe

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I suggest you read about the structure of a limerick , which is posted by Jess in the Workshop theme and he has also provided some examples.

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Also please read "Full Metal Limericks" posted by Jess in stream for examples.

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