What caught my initial gaze
was eyes of deepest emerald green.
I didn't hardly see much else
as I fell into them.
Next came that cheerful lilting laugh
which rang out often through the day
and matched perfectly the happy voice
released by diminutive form
I soon learned the perfect fit
we made when we came together
and my fingers ran through that fine hair
with the perfume of summer love
All these thing from long ago
tell of why I once loved you
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Boy...that was double quick!
Boy...that was double quick!
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Don't tell anybody but I get advance intelligence on what each contest is about lol......stan
stan
is it free style
looks like sonnetly to me
let's see
No rhyme-check, varied rhythm- check..........only thing sonnets is the fact that last two lines are in their own stanza but that is the result of line limitation and me not being able to wrap things up in 12 lines lol.....stan
lol stan
lol