lovedly
lovedly
Mar 16, 2022

Who Knows FINALLY AMEN 'TWAS

When we reach the estuary
not to worry
your LORD
awaits thee finally

for a one so dear
this is a DEDICATION
not personal

but only a seven decades
extraordinarily association
so friendly

Tears seemingly flow
to wash the paths ahead
my heart alone knows

the sword of sorrows

end
finally amen

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Candlewitch

instead of NO, I think you want (NOT) what has you so sad dear friend? the dedication is lovely.

*hugs, Cat

Geezer

if a friend or family member is very ill. It is hard to say goodbye to people close to you. I wish you the strength to deal with it.
I do like your choice of words, and the prayer for that person. Very nicely said. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

the end was inevitable
now we continue
the eart continues its STABLE
CHANGE IS CHANGEABLE only
CONSTANT
Cats thanks
let the hearts bleed for a while
can't stop then move on
the world
the earth revolves
we also