lovedly
lovedly
Apr 12, 2022

WHISTLING TRAIN

Keeps awaking all
in our village
again and again

then they say
don't make children

it's 3 a.m.
tell them all what to do

twiddle thumbs
what fun
no pun

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

what do you do, while waiting to go back to sleep?
I guess tiring oneself out in order to get back to sleep in the easiest way!
And so much fun! ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch

when I can't sleep I meditate and use self-hypnosis. it helps me greatly!

*hugs, Cat