lovedly
lovedly
Jun 07, 2015

WHINERE ME

God bless you Sir poets of
Neopoet
for helping me find
the depths of my mind
deep within me
surge waves of vibrations
and
that helps me to stay attuned
with folks like you

NOW SAY AGAIN WILL YOU ?

what and how would you feel

if one day i just

VANISHED

will you miss me

ANYONE??????
EXCEPT IAN!
AMEN....

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Sparrow

Don't ask those that disregard your works to give an opinion of whether they will miss you or not even in jest.

You see young Bard
there you will be
a part of our memory

Then when we leave this plain
All we do is call your name

And there you will be
A thinking creature of energy
Full of love and completely free.

Now be good and stop testing me
Your writing is satisfactory.
Yours as always Ian.T
lol you know we love you, U C

alidzain

Jess do enjoy some of your works. Me as well. Not sure about others. So there you have my reply to your question.

Alid

weirdelf

your pathetic pleas for attention.
Some of your poetry is superb and it would receive more attention and feedback if you gave honest, constructive critique to others, in plain English, not pseudo-verse.