lovedly
lovedly
Nov 01, 2020

Where will lovers meet

In silence
loneliness
mundanes
grief
joy
day
night
in brightness
darkness
but only meet
if at all
in drooping eyes
as hearts smile...

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Today is lovers day as is any day

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Dystopia

Hi! This poem is such a gem, it appears at first glance as a bunch of words but when you read it the meaning is so clear! I would just take a look at the last line and make it plural as you are discussing two lovers. This is a piece is truly short and sweet!

lovedly

never ever delete a composed poem
angels still exist and come to teach
out of the vast wilderness I beseech
Thanks for your kind emergence

Dystopia

Nice work on the revision! It is a small change but does make a difference! Also… your comments in poetry form are also just as delightful (makes me think)!