When Tears Flow
from top to toe
Even Niagara Falls
stop for a moment
to share my tear
add on its fragrance
as memories also refreshes
times gone by
O what a life
full of digression
gets washed away in a moment
then Niagara asks
O friend what happened
never mind let tears flow
they wash away all past and present
to pave a new way for the future
this now comes as a new pleasant
Niagara moves on slowly
sadly for a moment
then conveys to me
'Life is Like a River'
let it flow will thee
there is nothing left to worry
Time is in no hurry
glow let tears flow
slowly gradually
Abide with me
I am like thee
flowing along with Time
since centuries
nothing can
nor has ever tried
to stop me
keep moving
wash your eyes
with a new perfume
You as a soul
are truly lovely...
Comments
A niceee comment No
''A lovely musing on the ways we can ameliorate suffering
by trying to focus on the beauty and cycles of nature.
Pain is a constant,
but so is beauty.
Nice work on this.
sorry 15
I always reply each and every one sorry wonder how I overlooked it thanks for liking it .
angry you must be haven't seen u around lately LONDONER that be ye.
Hi lovedly, wonderful
Hi lovedly, wonderful reflection on the cycles of life and Nature. As Heraclitus said, "you can never bathe twice in the same river".
The title and contents are fine, but, as usual, I believe some joining together of verses would make the flow of the river smoother.
Enjoyed, Gracy
this did just flow
along with my actual tears
how I wished
reading it you'd
know
thank you all
for reaching
my flowing tears