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May 24, 2011

When All Say REviewed

When All Say
Poetry is too simplistic
Then write,
that which is not.

When you compose
What is too fuckin complicated
Then again straightaway
Confiscate it.

Never mind
What others have to say
They are all going to critique it
In their own imitable way

Accept it if you will
Or else smile,
LOL…
But let the critique,
Not your conscience kill.

Poetry is all about emotions,
In which one is submerged
And
From corrosive thoughts
Errors surface in turn.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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Comments

loved

loved

13 years 11 months ago

UR such a gentle person
in todays world
it astonishes me
great friends
we could be and are.

S

A person with whom you are familiar said "to thine own self be true". Not bad advice.............scribbler

loved

loved

13 years 11 months ago

a good advisor and friend
to thee i am friendly
equally
what sayest
thou
now???

wesley snow

I'll not try to comprehend. This poem is not you. This poem is not the you I have been presented to. I must assume this is poem from another time...another you. Istan