than to be loved
despite ones anonymity
city
and being black or beauty
across the seven seas
Canada to Florida
Aussie maybe
or from Amazon ...
let not my being disturb anyone
for I am brought by the Divine
if there be one
to spread peace and comfort
for all down trodden...
so let it be my mission
yes under you all an admission
go not by my gender
colour or breed
just read this bard
and
of all anxiety be freed.
Jan 25, 2013
what more love can man /woman /being expect
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
loved
I long ago stopped trying to work you out
It's a futile endeavor
I accept the poet and "person" you are
And I will read and critic your poetry
I don't need to know who you are
I know a small part of you through
your words
And that's enough
Love Jc xxx
HOW gracefully put across in apt words
where can I come to salute you
yet remain invisible
you are like that mirror in a still pool
which can never move
as it reflects the moon
so am I one
like the yellow one too...
Loved
Like a scream from someone at a masked ball, "I am here, though you can't see me"
We don't need to see you loved.
As long as your poetry is good for us to read then there is NO worry about what or who you are, you have been here for a few years and several followers.
We know that you will write great pieces amongst all this type of write,
stay with us, and stay as you are, if needs be.
I wonder if you is an Alien trying to woo us before an invasion lol
Take care young Bard and go well, Yours Ian.T
alen or a legend... heaven knows Mr Alison could be just lien
As long as your poetry is good for us to read
then there is NO worry
about what or who you are,
you have been here for a few years and several followers.
several followers???
are you tooo kidding I thought only you and Serendipity read me most
thanks any ways
it elates me