She asked me
if I did love (her)
I asked (her) to first define
LOVE
She smiled
and
left me for ever
with another...
Her intentions were obvious
she was just
another unqualified lover
She asked me
if I did love (her)
I asked (her) to first define
LOVE
She smiled
and
left me for ever
with another...
Her intentions were obvious
she was just
another unqualified lover
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Loved
Love is the most powerful that can exist in the world. Loved your poem.
thank you tyro
I was wondering if you had forgotten me
thanks for the delightful comment