weeping willow

Early on
a misty morning
I hear
a lonesome cry .
For twas
a weeping willow
torn with
teardrop
in it’s eyes.
I whistled
“ what’s the matter”
And this was
His reply.

“For I’m
a winter willow
with
my mind
weighed in woe .
For I have
to face
the future
But I’m
too afraid to go .”

About This Poem

Last Few Words: I used the rhythm or my inspiration for this was the song Kevin Barry sang by Tracy Newman.

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Virginia, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe homer Dante Alighieri Oscar Wilde

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Comments

hello,

I very much enjoyed the flow and pacing of this poem.

*hugs, Cat

thank you for reading I haven’t written much in a long time because I’ve been having problems with my head and I’ve been writing a story
But thank you I was inspired to write this by Tracy Newmans song Kevin Barry
https://youtu.be/A-ROx35kjFg

Great!

Your poem was great. The imagery was detailed nicely. Thanks for sharing. Love and light. Namaste

Thank you

Thank you for reading this i usually have alliteration I don’t usually rhyme . Anyway thank you again I hope your doing fine

it is...

really nice to see you back! we have missed you!

*hugs, Cat
ever, eddy