lovedly
lovedly
Nov 10, 2021

WE ALL CIRCLE TIS WINDY

CIRCLES
We as does the wind
keep circling
as whirl winds
at times very cold
slowly warming till we hasten circling
what the wind
no no no
ourselves all should by now know
circling makes us all glow
we like the Thames Nile and other rivers flow
then off we go to blow
as the wind often whistles
does follow
but loud
not soft
so lie low

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

people circle around and around, it's just more blowhard stuff! While the wind whistles, everybody should just lie low, because sometimes it's just whistling in the dark. ~ Geez.
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O

I think I am in awe of the ethereal beauty of your work. You invite me to de-link from language and leap into pure instinct and imagery and all the feels...

Jamie