One we’re here in the pleasant valley.
Oh No Corona’s going up our alley.
We’re here at Two
What Do We Do?
we run as quick as can be .
Well here we go again going up to Three.
Three we heard something like several lions .
Oh No here comes the red raging sirens.
We’re here at Four sitting on the floor.
“BANG! HEY OPEN UP”
Oh No there’s a RiOT! at our door.
They broke down our door and blasted us all to bits.
can’t have a funeral so we’re going on to Six.
Hey wait a minute they never found a fix .
So we jumped off Six.
Now we’re here on To Seven.
What Do We Do?
we’re going up to Heaven.
Comments
Good one, Edward. Prose
Good one, Edward. Prose poetry, as usual. Wish you luck in the contest. All the best, Gracy
Thank you
You to
suggestion
shortn your sentences or use line breaks
I tried to fix I hope it is better
I edited it you might look at it you might not let’s see.
very nice
coming from just a kid
@15
Hope you win
Thank you
Thank you
Hmmm....
Just some ideas... group the verse together... utilize white space a bit less, and for emphasis.... find a continuity in the words towards the lines using the numbers...
Thank you
Okay