OriginalRhyku
Jul 06, 2017

Veni Vidi Vinci:

Mona Lisa smile
With eyes seemingly mobile
Aspect to beguile

About This Poem

Last Few Words: A picture is worth a thousand words but can a few words create a picture? I would have entered this in a "1000 words can paint a picture" contest but the bare minimum amount of words necessary to enter this contest was set to 100 words. Let the viewers and reviewers of this Rhyku judge whether 13 words (including the Title) painted a picture.

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore

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Comments

weirdelf

Mona Lisa grin
Bespeaks some secretive sin
That gives us a win

I think it's worthy, OR, but you need to put (July Contest) in the title to have it considered.