Warrior Princess
Warrior Princess
Aug 31, 2022

Utophia

At night I dream to pass the pain
To numb my soul from all the hidden shame
To feel alive and so divine
To feel the presence of those who passed.

At nights I dream just to run away
From the darkness that plagues my way
To see the lake and sit and chat
A peace that filled my weary heart
To smell the roses and carnations
To take one last breadth of my lonesome existence.

At nights I dream to stay in that realm
And dwell under the shade of never end
To think of no fear, worries or sadness
But only the beginning of pure happiness
To shine, to laugh, hope and dream
The journey ended with a new beginning.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Any comments on how this piece can be improved will be most appreciated. Thank all.

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About the Author

Country/Region: South Zone

Favorite Poets: Maya Angelou

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