Untitled Haiku

Love is a violin,
The high E grips my heart strings
never to let go.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: This is one haiku I'm thinking of using to build a book of Haiku.

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins

Comments

Poetic moment

Where's haiku is itself a strictly guarded structure by purists , so many syllables to a line and all that, I am personally not impressed with that take. I believe a very short poem which has a certain sense of paradox or abstract between 2 or more images works. I think the images here connect on that universe and makes a poem. It is unique to some of you previous entries in that it is both personal and impersonal at the same time. Your range is expanding and it is a joy to watch!

Thanks!

Hey T.

I've tried building a 'body of haikus' with some degree of success-
https://www.neopoet.com/node/2669

I can see where you could take yours in several directions.

Me, too.

It's about the heart's strings. Opera and a good haiku does that to me too. Enjoyed the tugging.