Robert Leutwiler
May 24, 2019

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we invited
Urayoán Noel
onto the car port above the Sherpas.

send in a friend.
make haste with the tape!

do you understand without much ado
meanings: the lessons for working in teams?

dreams fade if you look away from meanings...
cruel dictates prove only fodder for ghouls;

fools delight in belittling opposite tools
of research in institutions seeking help from above.

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: USA-- Connecticut and Puerto Rico

Favorite Poets: Essama Chiba

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