no lips can utter
no words by sound
convey beauty
when it exists unbound
on this planet
nor no other
not even a kiss
can impart enough
to a beauty such as this
when you're in love
Steven Zoric
no lips can utter
no words by sound
convey beauty
when it exists unbound
on this planet
nor no other
not even a kiss
can impart enough
to a beauty such as this
when you're in love
Steven Zoric
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Steven
You now have streamed three poems without a title, come on commit to your write and give the write a banner to fly.
Your words are fine and the themes are good so come on give them a name..
There are a few workshops that you can join and we would be pleased to have you there, when we write about Digit etc: we love new blood some of these old codgers have lumps in their blood lol.
Take care out there and come and have a bit of fun also, Yours Ian.T