We are the peoples' nation of Zrcheckslovanounious.
No one is able to pronounce us.
Our citizens therefore denounce us.
We're a proud population of three.
Our emperor he is a llama.
Who has his very own song-a.
He wrote it whilst hitting a bong-a.
He'll 'maaaaah' at you for free.
So welcome to the Republic.
Don't drink our water - you'll get sick.
Our Emperor Mo Mao Mick
says: 'mahh mahh mahh merr meer meee'
Last Few Words: Motivation and focus: My profile random question over on blogspot asked to "write a new national anthem using an animal sound at least once." - I figured it was a ridiculous and silly request, so I found it fitting to write a ridiculous poem, and therefore tried to stretch the boundaries of lunacy! Format is a modified Tanaga Quadrameter. Hopefully, the right selection was made as to 'eastern' or 'western' It is untitled for now, because I haven't been able to think up something epic yet. I'm going for full-blown ridiculous.
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lol
I'll trade leaders with you lmao.........stan
Awesome!
The last stanza could use some tweaking with the meter (especially since the first two are excellent), but otherwise I just plain loved this poem.
wesley
Jess
LOL what an imagination you have. I wouldn't know how to begin or where to critique this one lol
So I'll sit back laugh and leave it alone
Welcxome back buddy!
Wow you suceeded in your attempt!!
epic, can ridiculous be that. I have heard epic stupid. wait I have been that once or twice in my life.
nice to see you back, are you done with school.
Eddie
Hi Jess,
" asked to "write a new national anthem using an animal sound at least once." - I figured it was a ridiculous and silly request, so I found it fitting to write a ridiculous poem, and therefore tried to stretch the boundaries of lunacy!"
I think you have succeded marvelously in your endeavor! And I want you to know that I laughed my @ss off!
No suggestions, just appreciation!
always, Cat