Alex Tanner
Alex Tanner
Feb 28, 2023
This poem is part of the contest:

Uninhibited 🏆 Winner

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Uninhibited

See the candle flicker,
Her tongue caress the flame,
Hot wax drip on naked flesh,
Her face delight in pain.

See the ropes hold tightly,
The lash caress her skin.
Buttocks, breast soft white thighs,
Anticipation makes her sigh,
Where shall the torment begin?

No pleasure without some little pain,
Enough to make her moan,
And sigh,
And sob,
And promise
To belong to me alone.

To do my every bidding,
To be my special whore.
Obey me without question,
Though I use her body sore.

She is so pure and lovely
Gives to me her all,.
Knows no inhibitions,
Holds me in her thrall.

About This Poem

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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Isle of Wight United Kingdom

Favorite Poets: Poe

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Comments

Candlewitch

this is enchantingly gorgeous! you are a silver-tongued devil ;) I am rendered speechless!

*love & hugs, Cat & eddy styx

p.s.

ever line is perfection; therefor I cannot choose favorites!

Alex Tanner

Silver tongued? I'm not sure my wife would agree. Perhaps I was once, which gave me an idea to knock off a quickie. Watch this space. Alex

Ruby Lord

Wow Alex, congratulations on winning the half year competition and on such an amazing poem. A great read and I loved it. Ruby :)