Unenendurable

Unendurable pleasure
Indefinitely prolonged
Gilgamesh cup of tea
That's a Satori

Guy

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Country/Region: Australia

Favorite Poets: Tramalchio

Comments

Hi,

I'd give it a title that helps ...

saying that, I'm not sure
what you are saying. I love
Gilgamesh, unsure what the
reference means ... perhaps an
old, very flavorful cup of tea. It's
something I've done as well (use
nouns or people as descriptors).

Satori ... the nature of nothingness,

would definitely be unendurable.

Richard

As far as I can remember

As far as I can remember(since the great flood !) Gilgamesh has a cup of tea with a couple beyond Life and Death

cheers, Guy