I came to you
on Christmas day
to express my love for you
for the joy that you brought
into my life
filled with a sense of warmth
to see the radiant smile
on your face
with the question
that I popped to you
down on my knee
in asking you
to be my lovely wife
my heart was hoping
for the answer to "Yes"!
in witnessing our lips
pressed gently against
each other
in celebrating this special occasion
with a truly blessing gift
on a holiday season
that instilled a great memory
to be cherished forever
Dec 13, 2022
This poem is part of the challenge:
December 2022 Random Challenge Under the Mistletoe
Under the Mistletoe
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The word is:
I came to you
on Christmas day
to express my love for you
for the joy that you ×(bring) (brought)✓
into my life
Very nice meditation words fancy arrangement.
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Thank you for the feedback.
Thank you for the feedback. Yes, thank you for catching the past-tense usage.
You're welcome !
Dear poet!
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A little help?
..I don't see what the issue was with the word "bring". If you could explain it please.
Thanks
Thomas
The Mistletoe Wife
Hello Hon,
A lovely poem capturing a very special moment!
Thank you,
L
Hello hon
I am late to this thread, so I agree with Lavender.and wish you the best at the contest.
P.S May be you'd like to edit your title to go with the contest title( It should be the same) as a condition to win
Pls.find it here
https://www.neopoet.com/contest/december-2022-random-challenge-under-mi…
your rose is pink
I wonder if you know I am ROSE also
What a fond and special memory
The holidays can bring such joy! Thank you for sharing.